Democane's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Acuahombre!]

Pretty funny, fue chingon

[Mega Man Short Blast]

Alright

I think if you would have spent a little more time on the art, this could have been great. The jokes were ok, and the presentation was good... but yeah that hotdog thing really brought the whole thing down.

[--Orange--]

How come his parents were black and white?

they never touched him once in his whole life? Or they are immune to technocolor..?

[Complex]

Really good!

Coulda been perfect except for the voices, I mean the guy was ehhh, but the little girl sounded off. Everything else was perfect though, keep it up.

[Geoweasel Episode 10]

Pretty ok

I think you need less time in between the character's lines of dialog. It's a little unnatural. Other than that it's pretty good

[Lines In Time]

Amazing.

I loved it, music animation it's all gravy baby, but I got one problem with it. If the little bug is all alone, who took those pictures of him during those sad moments in his life? And why did he bother framing them? I'm just saying...

AliensOnToast responds:

Yeah...I'm putting it down as creative licencing

[RUSH.]

Cool lighting effects bro.

I'm guessing this was a study of shading or something right? Anyways yeah your movements were great, and the colors and backgrounds were fantastic, however I gotta agree with everyone else that it's too ambiguous as to what his rush is. You didn't add any voices or words to keep the movie as accessible as possible, but anyone can tell there's no motivation for the character. Great direction, pretty ok story telling.

gzilbalodis responds:

Originally I wanted to have music playing in the background. I don't know anything about sound design and I had very little time to make them sound better. I tried to add some voices but it sounded quite strange.

[Around the Sun]

Really good

That was really cool dude, I liked all the camera cuts, and the story was like straight from a novel or something. You may have a simple art style, but you're a way better director than most of the people here. My suggestion for the next time is better sound quality. Good times keep at it

[The mouse and the lion]

Perfect

Voices animation, timing, it was all gold. I especially liked how the mouse talked like the old chucky cheese.

[Girlchan in Paradise Ep3]

By far the best one to date

I liked this one way more than the previous 2. Maybe because the jokes were less subtle, and I didn't have to think as much.